Friday, August 1, 2008

55 Flash Fiction #2

This is my second 55 Flash Fiction entry. I have decided to make this a continuing story so below is my current entry. To view the whole story Click Here


‘Dear Sarah, SCREW YOU… HOW DARE YOU THINK YOU COULD…’ Jeff stared at what he had written. With a grumble he cleaned the paper with his eraser and sighed deeply.

Jeff reached into his pocket and retrieved a small picture of a beautiful girl blonde girl and started to cry while he tore it up.

7 comments:

Mona said...

awwww..Poor Jeff...that hurts I know!
Both sides I guess...even to the torn photo...

I hope he will stick it back like This

ciara said...

awww, heart breaking. can't wait to see how it unfolds. i don't have my current 55 up yet, but you can see my others on http://ciarasramblingsandwhatnot.blogspot.com

smarmoofus said...

I have no sympathy for Jeff. I know it was all his fault in the first place.

(Why am I so smart-alecky with you?! Anybody else, I'd take it seriously, but with you... *snark*)

Come read my story!
-smarmoofus

Mojo said...

God can I ever relate to Jeff's state of mind. Been down that road a time or two.

And Mona, I love that photo... the tears and tape just give it more depth of character.

I'm up too... see if you can guess my inspiration this week ;)

Missy said...

Hmm this one is a jaw scratcher. I mean I could think maybe she had his baby and didn't tell him or maybe she ran off with another and left him high and dry.

Either way it would suck!!

Have a great weekend and enjoy your Friday tomorrow

Queenie said...

First time here but it looks like I'm hooked, poor Jeff.

Akelamalu said...

I just got back off holiday so thankfully I only missed your first 55, (which I have just read btw). I have a feeling this is going to be an interesting saga!