Friday, October 31, 2008

55 Flash Fiction - #9

I have made this a continuing story. Below is my current entry and to view the full story Click Here

As Jeff ate his hot breakfast he couldn’t help but watch Jacqueline serve the other customers, and every time she would catch him looking she smiled. Jacqueline approached the table and asked “Anything else hun?” Jeff smiled and shook his head. “If there is let me know,” she said as she handed him the receipt.

This post inspired by the MEME

2 comments:

G-Man said...

I'd have said..."yeah baby, a little dessert..." Then winked.
Anyway, Thanks for playing O.
Good job!! Have a very Happy Halloween

Mona said...

Ditto! what G man said :D