Friday, October 3, 2008

Flash Fiction 55 - #7

I have made this a continuing story. Below is my current entry and to view the full story Click Here

Staring through the diner window he wondered if he should go in, but the rumble of his stomach made his decision. Jeff entered and found a booth in the corner.

As the beautiful waitress approached him Jeff read her nametag, Jacqueline. What a pretty name he thought as she said, “What can I get yah?”


This post inspired by the MEME

6 comments:

G-Man said...

"You can bring me Hot Tongue and Cold Shoulder, thats what I get at home"..

Great job Mr. O...Thanks for visiting and the heads up. Thanks for participating, and have a Great Week-End...G

smarmoofus said...

Nice scene set-up. I could picture it. Great job, Mr. O!

-smarmoofus

Akelamalu said...

I could visualise the scene from your words. Good job.

SignGurl said...

Ahaha, that G-Man always has a zinger, doesn't he?

Nicely done on the 55! Now I'm hungry.

Mojo said...

Just one thing wrong with this story...

My name's not Jeff.

Good one!

Mona said...

Jeff & Jackie...Hmmm.. nice sounding 'pair'