Thursday, October 22, 2009

55 Flash Fiction

Its been way to long but I'm excited to be back doing 55 Flash Fiction.

Chad didn't think he would ever do something like this, but the desire for revenge burned within him. This story is a little dark, but Ive just started watching the tv show Dexter. I love it!!!

Anyway, on to the fiction.

As his sister's killer came around the corner he plunged the knife into the man's back and he dropped to the floor bleeding. Chad stood over the lifeless murder and smiled, knowing this man wouldn't kill again.





15 comments:

smarmoofus said...

Eep! Murderer! *hides*

No, wait! *runs back and grabs LinZ* I'll save you! *now hides*

-smarmoofus

G-Man said...

Ahhhh...The prodigal Son returns!
Nice to have you back O...
Excellent 55 as well.
Thank you for this fine contribution, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End....G

Gruesome is Good!!!

Tall Kay said...

First time here...revenge is sweet for a 55 story! Nice to meet you!

Alice Audrey said...

And who, then, is the murderer?

Dr.John said...

Welcome back.
An ethical problem. Is it right to kill a killer?
Fine 55

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.
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But it’s a groaner.

Brian Miller said...

great 55! so what does that make him now...and was it a one time thing r has he taken on the legacy? smiles.

mine is up!

Hootin' Anni said...

Oooooooo, good one.

My 55 is posted, if you'd like to stop by and read along with me. As always, scroll down below my Show n Tell Friday submission. Click HERE

Have a glorious weekend.

Chef Kar said...

Great ethical question is begged ~ and what would I do in the situation?

Well done.

You'll find my 55 here:

Friday Flash 55 ~ Drifting.

Enjoy your weekend,

Chef Kar

Dulce said...

It makes me wonder...killing ouch!
Great 55

VE said...

Excellent. Funny how the killer is just replaced by another...

Ofira Sephiroth said...

Someone how Dexter seems to inspire a lot of people. Nicely written.

clean and crazy said...

great 55, you should consider writing a novel!! my 55 is finally posted

Mama Zen said...

Excellent 55!

Mom of Opiate Addict said...

Great 55 for the Halloween season!

Susan at Stony River said...

Lots of food for thought in there; a murderer of a murderer? Oh no!!

Loved it!