Thursday, November 5, 2009

55 Flash Fiction

This post is brought to you by 55 Flash Fiction.

His palms were sweating, his heart was racing, and his mouth was dry as a bone. Looking into Susie's he took hold of her hand and got on one knee.

As he looked up at the love of his life he said, "Will you make me the happiest man in the world?" She replied, "YES!"


9 comments:

Chef Kar said...

Sweet. When's the wedding?

My 55 is posted: Flash 55 ~ Awakening

Brian Miller said...

heart about to hud out of your chest...yep that captures that moment well. so are congrats in order? fun 55

mine is up.

Hootin' Anni said...

Sweeeeeeeeet!!

Mine is Pepper Sprayed today. Click Here and scroll down beyond my Friday's Show n Tell to find my 55. Have a glorious weekend.

g-man said...

A romantic 55....
Excellent job O!!
Thanks for returning to the Friday Fun-Fest. I'm so glad you are back.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick-Ass Week-End....G

Dr.John said...

Since your married this is either a flash back or just a creative 55.
Well done

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.

clean and crazy said...

nicely written. i love happy endings!! great 55, great way to top off the week!! mine is up too

Alice Audrey said...

Awww. I feel like telling them congratulations. Now if only it would work out so easily for my Suzie.

Monkey Man said...

Very nice. I could sense his relief. My 55 is HERE.

smarmoofus said...

Ahhh, yes! Yes, of course I will! *swoon*

*wink*
-smarmoofus